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Uma Shankar
November 07, 2021 07:01 PM

Sloka 14– चामरवेर—-चामरवरे। सुमनस्सां….. सुमनसां। मातस्तदाकण्यर्ताम्….. मातस्तदालोक्यताम् may be more comprehensive?? Anyway, मातस्तदाकण्यर्ताम् has SP error, should be मातस्तदाकर्ण्यताम्। Sloka 15—-ह्रींकारात्रयसंपुटेन… ह्रींकारत्रयसंपुटेन। संवेशो नमसः सहस्रमखिलं……is संवेशो मनसः समाधिरखिलं । which phrase is best suited to bring out the purport?

Uma Shankar
November 07, 2021 06:36 PM

Sloka 13–कमनीयकान्तिभिरलङ्गारामलारार्तिका Is कमनीयकान्तिभिरलङ्रकारामलारार्तिका । अलंकार not अलंगार । is it not, Sir?

Uma Shankar
November 07, 2021 06:32 PM

Sloka 12— This verse begins with the first bīja (sa स) of the third and last kūṭa The typo on the first letter of the first word…. गच्छायैः To be सच्छायैः। Sloka 13– कमनीयकान्तिभिरलङ्गारामलारार्तिका is कमनीयकान्तिभिरलङ्गारामलारात्रिका In another version. Would like to know which word is correct. अमला+आरार्तिका पात्रे OR is it अमला+आरात्रिका पात्रे। बहुविधैर्वक्त्रांबुजामोदनैः is बहुविधैर्वक्त्रांबुजामोदितै:। Which word is most suitable—आमोदितै: or आमोदनै:??

Uma Shankar
November 07, 2021 05:46 PM

Sloka 9– तस्यशयम् to be तस्याशयम् । Sloka 10– चित्रैर्हाटकपुत्रिकाकरधृतैर्गव्यैर्घृतैर्वधितै …the last word of the samasa is वर्धितै:।

Uma Shankar
November 07, 2021 05:36 PM

Sloka 7– कस्तूर्रितिलकं is कस्तूरीतिलकं। नयनयोः दिव्याञ्चनं may be written as नयनयोर्दिव्याञ्जनं।

Uma Shankar
November 07, 2021 05:26 PM

Kindly add the padavicheda like you have done for first sloka and please add the meaning for each samastapadam For all Slokas. Namaste

Uma Shankar
November 07, 2021 05:24 PM

मञ्चीरौ to be corrected as मञ्जीरौ नासामोक्तिकमङ्गुलीयकटकौ to be corrected as नासामौक्तिकमङ्गुलीयकटकौ

Uma Shankar
November 07, 2021 05:21 PM

हिन्दोलद्युतिहीरपुरिततरे Kindly make the पु as पू। हिन्दोलद्युतिहीरपूरिततरे।

manblunder
November 07, 2021 02:59 PM

I have addressed all your pointed out errors. Thank you very much for pointing out these errors. I am sorry for the mistakes.

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